hey is Jason! ha ha nice song, and good drums as always. Although I dont expect any slacking, considering you are a drummer, lol. out of curiosity, what FX do you put on your master channel generally?
Lol thnx for the cmment!
I like it!
Hey...you've got some talent for sure. you did a really good job of capturing all the notes. I just have a few things I want to say that could be improved:
first, the kicks sound a bit weak. I can barely hear them throughout most of the song, and same with the snares at times. the hats all sound good though. Just work on making the other drums more audible.
Second, at the end of the song, around 3:56 I think when the melody starts to fade out...well let's just say its REALLY loud, lol. tone that part down a little. I know what you were going for but its still too loud. Other than that I like the song. keep up the good work!
and if you have time, check out my latest submission, "Krater (Short Phantom mix)" I'd love to hear what you think. Again, great job on this song. Its a favorite of mine from the game so I really enjoyed it.
To be honest, I think you're looking for something you dont really need. I can try and give you some feedback but I'm probably not experienced enough to help much, not to mention that there isn't much wrong with the song to begin with.
What stuck out the most to me is the quality. I can easily hear each individual sound clearly, nothing is really drowned out by anything else. I have a lot of trouble with this when I make songs so I really respect someone like you who can make each sound crisp and clear. I think the quality is good as it is.
I like the progression almost everywhere, but for some reason around 2:30 it starts to sound a bit awkward all the way through about 3:15 or so. After that the song finishes nicely. I dont really know what makes it sound awkward, it just does. however, It didn't subtract anything from the song really. Everything still sounds good.
synth choices are great all around in my opinion. Starting at two mintues though I didn't like the lead synth that comes in as much as all the others you used. however, that same synth seems to fit perfectly at about 2:30 when it meshes with the other sounds. Its really strange...I like how it works in combination with the other sounds, but not by itself during that quiet buildup portion.
dude, overall this song is awesome...Im going to predict right now that it ends up on next weeks best tracks. Just a hunch I have...
Check out my tracks sometime...you really know what youre doing and could probably give me some good advice.
Thankyou VERY much for your feedback!
I cannot stress how much I appreciate honest criticisms, no matter how good or bad.
I am still trying to learn how to 'mesh' things together, but everything else is probably just trial and error, so thanks again for your help!
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